9.3 – Essential Scenes
Scene lists:
Introduce orphan in an orphanage – parents tried to abort but mother wasn’t brave enough
The orphan grew up to be an anarchist
By the age of 18, a rich pastor adopted him and taught him many valuable lesson
The pastor treated the orphan like his child, among the bad behaviors
The orphan, mid-20s, changed to become a smart and wise man and worked really hard
The orphan was trustworthy and got a promotion
The pastor died – the orphan was really sad, promised to be a good man
The orphan worked much harder
The orphan worked his way up and became a successful businessman
The orphan did charities and donate to orphanages – promoting adoption instead of abortion
The orphan had helped many people and died happily
They are all summaries.
The essential scenes are:
Introduce an anarchist orphan in an orphanage
By the age of 18, a rich and kind pastor adopted him and changed him
The orphan worked hard
The pastor died
The orphan promised to be a good man
The orphan worked much harder
The orphan became a kind-hearted successful businessman
Scene: Introduce an anarchist orphan in an orphanage
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9.4 – Crisis of the Story
The crisis of the story: The pastor died
Description of the moment: Aiden was beside him when John was on his death bed. Holding his tears, waiting for his old pop to wake up and say that everything is going to be alright. He felt the warmth of John’s hands, laying weak on the side of the bed. He then hold both of his hands together, to pray and ask God for a healing. During the prayer, Aiden wept. Then, at the end of the prayer, just after Aiden cried “Amen,” he heard a long beep on the monitor. John’s heart stopped beating. He had taken his final breath.
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